Values are something to bear in mind: A humble review of Two Greedy Bears
Two Greedy Bears is a lively tale about
two bear cubs whose selfishness will teach them an important lesson. Captivating readers with these childlike
characters, Mirra Ginsburg’s adaptation of a Hungarian folktale manages to work
with some important values which are essential in children’s development.
Besides, the illustrations help to achieve a fantastic representation
of emotions.
After bickering over who can drink more water from a
brook, the two bears find a big round cheese and another reason to quarrel
about. Driven by their covetous desire to get more cheese than the other, the
bears begin to fight. A clever fox approaches and promises to help the bears to
solve their problem. Tricking them with the promise of getting two equal pieces
of cheese, she starts eating it. Finally, when this crafty fellow feels she has
satiated her appetite, she leaves the two bear cubs with two tiny crumbs.
Ginsburg’s narrative is clear
and comprehensible. She uses simple vocabulary and short dialogues. Thus, it is
easy to focus on the
conception of values rather than grammatical or lexical aspects. In the development of the story,
several values such as generosity, self-hood and self-interest arise.
In addition,
Jose Aruego and Adriane Dewey’s illustrations mirror the characters' feelings
perfectly, adding more expression in tense moments. As a result, the characters
embody different personality features and this heterogeneity triggers an
interesting topic to work and discuss with children: diversity.
Ginsburg’s ideas, together
with Aruego and Dewey’s illustrations, create a vivid story. Two Greedy
Bears is the proof that positive values are always worthy.
Luna, I like the way in which you have been able to summarise your story's opinion in the 4th paragraph. Specially the words that you have used in; "... As a result, the characters embody different personality features and this heterogeneity triggers an interesting topic to work and discuss with children: diversity..." It tells you everything you need to know, Well done!
ReplyDeleteLuna, I like the way in which you have been able to summarise your story's opinion in the 4th paragraph. Specially the words that you have used in; "... As a result, the characters embody different personality features and this heterogeneity triggers an interesting topic to work and discuss with children: diversity..." It tells you everything you need to know, Well done!
ReplyDeleteLuna,I like the way you express clearly what you want to say and how you organise it.
ReplyDeleteI also think that you demostrate perfectly what it is important about this story.
Nayla Made
Great review Luna! You used some interesting words...
ReplyDeleteAs Mariana said before you found the way to sum up things very clearly. I enjoyed this extract of your review; "Ginsburg’s narrative is clear and comprehensible. She uses simple vocabulary and short dialogues. Thus, it is easy to focus on the conception of values rather than grammatical or lexical aspects. In the development of the story, several values such as generosity, self-hood and self-interest arise."
Good one! ;)
Nice review!!! I like the way you have finished it. Using two simple sentences your review is clearly closed and there is no place for having doubts about it. Great!!!
ReplyDeleteNice review!!! I like the way you have finished it. Using two simple sentences your review is clearly closed and there is no place for having doubts about it. Great!!!
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ReplyDeleteFantastic review, Luna! Utterly accurate!
ReplyDeleteAnd you've been absolutely creative about the title. A witty example of punography!
Great Job!
Andrés
Hey, thanks a lot everybody! I just saw all the comments.
ReplyDeleteAny critique will be openly accepted :)
Well, since you insist, I’ll suggest something.
DeleteThe richness of your excellent review contrasts with the emptiness of the central rectangle.
Inside this frame, “there is LESS than meets the eye.”
So I won’t be coy. L.C.ROIG: don’t avoid filling the void of the cuboid! (don’t foil or spoil your point)
Enjoy!
Andrés
Hey! Now there's no more emptiness! Great! You've allowed us to fully enjoy your review. Besides, if we ever come across that book, we'll recognize it at once. (The picture of the cover perfectly portrays
Deletethe topic and the main characters) Thanks Luna!!!
Luna, I liked very much your review. It was a good way to summarize the story and I liked the vocabulary that you have used too! Congrats!
ReplyDeleteFantastic rewiew! The phrase I'd like to use is "Ginsburg’s ideas, together with Aruego and Dewey’s illustrations, create a vivid story." It's simple but it's an effective way to summarize ideas.
ReplyDeleteI liked the linguistic move: "Captivating readers with these childlike characters, Mirra Ginsburg’s adaptation of..."
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